Feedback

The writing workshop was a success because it helped me see the errors that I had missed while I was editing. Although the three peer reviewers had most "yes" marked, there were some "almost" as well. After receiving my paper back, I realized that I need to separate my ideas or start new paragraphs so the two ideas are not in the same paragraphs. Furthermore, I also need to use transitional words more effectively, for it left some reviewers confused.